I tried to write you a song,
But my head refused to write.
All the words came out wrong,
and the melody didn't sound right.
I tried to write a Poem,
But the words wouldn't rhyme.
A piece dedicated to you as a omen,
but I was having nothing but a hard time.
I tried to write you a story,
But ideas were getting pretty tight.
It was suppose to end with you winning in glory,
But instead you lost the fight.
Writing you something, I tried, tried and tried.
But the truth is, I'm not a writer, I just lied.















Comments
An Awesome Comment: GREAT JOB, you say you're not a writer, but your wrong...
What you could improve on: Nothing, it is perfect the way it is, AND the ending gave me a feeling of completeness, a feeling that you had finished what you wanted to say, Perfect. Good Job!!!!
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"And those vultures sitting next to us,
Are just waiting for me to mess up.
And that's why I can't say anything more to you"
A comment from a stranger...thank you so much it made my day
Yeah it was suppose to sorta be funny, a contradiction I guess.
Thanks again, I appreciate the comment, more than you'll ever know.
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PrettyPower will never be her power...
"When you hear a great song, it touches your life. it affects you, it's like a scent, it reminds you of something. you fuck to it, you feel blue to it, you feel great to it.."
-Courtney Love
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I need you, like a corpse needs bed springs in his coffin.
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PrettyPower will never be her power...
"When you hear a great song, it touches your life. it affects you, it's like a scent, it reminds you of something. you fuck to it, you feel blue to it, you feel great to it.."
-Courtney Love
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Sweet sounds of music
Fill the air like perfume,
Yet not strong enough to silence
All the sounds of the night.
Love The Beatles!
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"Just remember I will always love you,
Even as I tear your fucking throat away.
But it will end no other way."
But i'd trade it all
For just a little bit of
Peace of mind.
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fa mi ly
fishie <><
Simple, and quirky.
Very nice.
-Chella
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"Enlist Your Prettiest Guns To Bring Me Down"
You're no one without a song in your head.
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I'm getting feelings I'm hiding too well
(Bury the horse shaped shell)
Something broke inside my stomach
I let the pieces lie just where they fell
Porcupine Tree - Open Car
~FåïNt-69~
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